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Wednesday 25 November 2020

my poem

 Hi blogger's

if you sa from the tite I am writing about my

!poem! yup I made a poem and

it is quite good it is small but the teacher 

said i had to and + I made a video of me saying

it but I did have to change it a bit I the video 

but it should be fine I think if you do

not want to watch it and you want to read it scroll down


Walking through the dark died and crunchy pathway, Almost tripping over the diedcorps that are rotting away, Bringing back memories back when the gruesome wars that Happened in this very forest, bones braking under my feet that made me go paralyzed. and i made if you are wondering how i made it scroll down more


i made my poem be first getting a plan and me and my class had to trays my hand on to paper and each finger was a plan idea so i finished that and then went on to the title of my poem i wanted to make it gev nothing away but i do not want to spoil it all



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