Hi bloggers
I am back with a new blog post topic my learning. I am learning to write a haiku .if you do not no what a haiku is you basically do a poem but the poem is not like a normal poem. in a haiku you count your silabils. are class room did a haiku me had to do a 17 haiku It was 5 7 5 if you yous a calculator that = 17 some of my ones are bright that 1 orange 2 fish 1 darts 1 thats 5 done now 7 oktopus 3 changing 2 colors 2 thats 7 done back to 5 pufferfish 3 blow 1 up 1 that's 1 haiku the other haiku is going to be in the comments.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 5 August 2020
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Hi rayan I am Peter I enjoyed the blog. DID YOU THINK ABOUT YOU COULD PUT A DLO IN you blog post. YOU NEED TO CHEAK YOUR BLOG IF IT IS DONE. I DON'T GET WHAT YOU ARE TRYING TO TELL ME. I HAVE DONE A POME BEFORE.
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Hi Rayan!
ReplyDeleteIts Shay here I love your blog post.
Did you think about adding a space beetween the interction to your blog post and the poem? or maybe add a reflection saying how well you think you did? I like your poem its very intersting good job Rayan
- Shay